Originally a good song, now better in my opinion.
I like the beginning "windmill windmill"
You did a good job of censoring, except for one word, but oh well.
An all around awesome track.
My favorite verses: 6th, 1st, 2nd.
Keep the meaning to your music.
Thanks Big appreciate the score and letting us know which verses you were feelin. More music comin soon from the Reckless.Youth.Division. so keep an ear to the streets
I agree, it's composed of fun.
Nevertheless, it's not an excuse to keep making unoriginal names, especially since it doesn't loop well.
I'm glad your uploading, you do too nice of work to keep it trapped on your macbook.
I like the syncopation, it adds nicely.
once again, make your songs more 3D, this was much better than your last one, but not there yet.
Thanks again Bubba :P
This is awesome!
I really like the originality of the movements in the song (or I haven't heard of any songs this is based on....)
It's got a definitive mood to it and well laid movement.
Keep it up.
y thank you i thought so my self had me zoning out like around the 50034897348975 times i listened to hence the story that goes with it thank you so much for the review
This is a great track.
I love the layed back feel and ambient rhythm section.
The song changes enough to stay interesting but doesn't lose the mood.
Definitely good work for an older song, I'm headed now to check out your others.
oh yes, please do that :)...
Thanks a lot!
It's a fact of opinion...
And in my opinion: this is awesome.
Again, you've got a purpose to your music.
This track'll be back to influence others, I'm sure.
Everything, the flow is thoughtful, the work put into this really shows through.
and only slightly: I could enjoy a more prominent bass/rhythm line.
Wish I could vote twice.
yea ima go back n lower the lyrics a bit so u can hear the music more. thx for the review fam. stay up
Good Grief man, you must be one of the very few artists who care what your music says. Not many do that anymore...
The lyrics don't flow as well as others could have, but it's apparent that other lyrics that would've sounded better wouldn't have conveyed the purpose of this track, which makes this better than so many others.
Just a suggestion: grammar and spelling can only help you, when used correctly.
By all means, keep the great work up. And keep the meaning to the music.
Author Comments fixed =) Thx for the review man. Yea this was remembering about falling down and rebuilding myself to where i am today. MAny can relate to it... many cant. But i think everyone has a hard past is their own way.
The depth added to what I consider 'rap' is great.
The phrasing and lyrics flowed nicely and actually had a point.
iLike: The meaning, rhythm layout, synthish piano at the intro, clarity of lyrics (mic quality)
iDislike: not much, I did catch a swear word but I'll live with it. ;-]
Great job, I look forward to another like this...
"I hear the world a shredding, I hand the duct tape out...."
Lol Wow! Thx man. mabie one of the best reviews yets. =) i didnt expect so much exposure for this song. since its been up for a lil bit. And i use to swear alot in my music. but i have found out... Why do it? It just trashes the integrity of it. you know? so yea i had like 1 in there but it wasnt ment in a bad way. =)
Following up with the line u like.
"To fix this lemon, we are living in"
I like that part too. when i wrote it i was like WOOOT! lol.
but hey thx for the review and support man. Ive been working on my new album. Rymix'd progression. it'll be here on NG Xmas. Stay up for that.
End? or Beginning?
I like it.
Normally people can't who run this kind of a tag-and-run song can't keep it together, but this does a good job.
The transitions are kinda harsh, not a bad thing.
Near then end is nice, it sounds kinda like Crystal-Method.
The Voices, personal preference.
More bass. The song is fine where it's at, but I would like to hear an underlying bass drive that anyone could stand turning up.
:D Awesome :D Hmm, I dont know if I should add bass or not, I cant really think of a good bassline that would fit with the song, other then that crazy one. Yeah I like the end drums XD
Thanks for the review :D
Play nice, man.
cman9099 didn't call for that kind of response, he just gave you his opinion.
The beats are alright, but it's true: you aren't accomplishing anything. Except practice.
The synth-ish break at ~1:00 is good, you hit something that fits.
Once again, its in 2d, design in 3d. (add depth)
Oh, and the beginning sounds too much like "Dur Da Dur Da Dur..."
hey bubba whats up?! (and again messing around in social studies, not spending hours finding a beat that works)
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